Monday, July 16, 2007

Tweaking

Who? Me? ATC
I received some additional guidance from Marta, and decided to work on her just a little bit more. Now I think she's done. Although I'm ready to move on from this piece, I'm always open to a critique. I've been drawing for less than six months, so I know I still have a lot to learn.

3 comments:

carlacarlacarlacarla said...

Yes! Eli and Marta were kind to offer their helpful suggestions, and you were wise to use them. The dark background and "eyeliner" are marked improvements. I suspect it's not uncommon for otherwise-talented drawers to avoid doing people because of the detail difficulties that accompany them.

As for me, I would've just photoshop-enhanced your original :)

Adrienne Berry said...

Okay, it's been almost 2 months now. I keep checking and checking for a post. Hope all is well with you.

Morning Artist said...

Great job. The contrast on the background brings out your subject. If you need any help on your painting project, feel free to drop me a note.